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WORD of the day. Persevere (verb) — to continue doing something despite difficulties. Example: She persevered with her studies despite financial struggles. Here are synonyms for persevere: persist, endure, carry on, stick at it.
Example sentence: Despite facing many challenges, the young entrepreneur persevered and eventually succeeded.
Vocabulary related to “Technology” Innovate Technological (verb) — introduce new methods or ideas. Cybersecurity (noun) — protection of computer systems. Gadget (noun) — a small technological device.
Technological examples. There is something called algorithm in technology. This is a step-by-step procedure for solving a problem. For example, a recipe for cooking is an algorithm. Debugging: Finding and fixing errors in code.
Spent hours debugging my code to find that one typo.
Loop: A sequence of instructions repeated until a condition is met. Variable: A storage location with a name and value. Example: x = 5 (x is a variable), IP address: A unique identifier for a device on a network. Router: A device connecting multiple networks. Example: The router directs traffic between my laptop and the internet. Bandwidth:
The maximum data transfer rate. Example: My internet bandwidth is 100 mbps. Protocol: Rules for data communication. Example: HTTP is a protocol for web browsing.
Building character description. Let us create a character. For example, Zara. Her personality is that of adventure. She is sarcastic and loyal. She is a wildlife photographer in rural Zimbabwe. She has got a messy braid, sun-kissed and has a penchant for black coffee. She is always chasing the next big shot in the bush.
Let us build sentences starting with: Zara walked. Zara walked through the savannah. She walked quietly through the savannah, her eyes scanning the horizon for wildlife. We can even add more: Zara walked quietly through the savannah, her eyes scanning the horizon for wildlife, her camera slinging low on her hip.
Example Breakdown: Subject (Zara) + verb (walked). Add place (through the savannah) Add manner (quietly) Add more details (eyes scanning . . . camera slinging . . .) What proper vocabulary do you use for your audience? Focus on using precise words: Instead of good, use excellent, suitable or effective. Use varied vocabulary. Mix simple and complex words, for example, interesting as opposed to fascinating. Context matters. Use formal language for essays, informal for narratives. Let us look at improving writing with some examples. Instead of: The person walked better,” you can use “The woman strolled confidently.”
Instead of: The food was nice. You can better it by saying: The meal was delectable and aromatic. Instead of: “He was angry” can better read as “He seethed with frustration.” Describing people: Instead of he is tall. You can say: He towers above the crowd. Instead of: “She is happy,” you can say: “She beams with joy.”
Describing places: Instead of: The room is big. The room is spacious and airy. Instead of saying, “The city is busy,” you can say “The city pulsates with activity.” Describing actions. Instead of “she spoke.” The sentence could read: She articulated her thoughts eloquently. Instead of “He ran,”the sentence can be “He sprinted with determination.”
Describing feelings. Instead of: “She felt,” it can be: “A wave of melancholy washed over her.” “He was excited,” can be “He was ecstatic with anticipation”.
More examples for learners to produce detailed and more mature work through describing emotions. Instead of:
“She was happy,” the sentence can be “Euphoria radiated from her smile.” “He felt angry” could be, “Indignation burned within him”.
Describing environments. Instead of: “The forest was dark,” it can be “The forest was shrouded in eerie twilight.” Instead of “The beach was beautiful” it could read, “The beach was a serene oasis with crystal clear-waters”.
Describing actions: Instead of: “She walked slowly,” it can be, “She sauntered, savouring the moment.”
“He spoke loudly,” can be written as, “His voice boomed with authoritative resonance.” Describing characters. “He was a good leader,” could be, “He was a visionary leader, inspiring confidence”. “She was intelligent” can read as:
“Her intellect was razor-sharp” and insightful.
Using sensory details. Instead of “The food smelled good” it can be “The aroma of freshly baked bread wafted enticingly. “The music was loud” could be, “The music pulsed with a deafening beat”.
More examples for narratives. Instead of: “The day the day was bad,” it can be: “The day unfolded with a series of unfortunate events.” The day was a catastrophe from dawn till dusk. Instead of “She went to the market,” it can be
“She navigated the bustling market haggling with vendors.” With a determined stride, she vanished into the market throng.
Instead of “He met a stranger,” it can be improved to: “A chance encounter with a stranger altered his trajectory.” He locked eyes with a mysterious stranger across the room. Instead of the storm came. The storm swept in, unleashing its fury. Dark clouds gathered, heralding the tempest’s arrival. Instead of: She felt scared.
The sentence can read, “Fear gripped her heart, a cold dread seeping in.” Her nerves were on edge, anticipation building.
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